Okay so I have been working on this Legend of the Seeker story and my boyfriend refuses to read it till I'm finished so here I am posting it on deviantart as I go. I would like some reviews, opinions and constructive criticism. Even if you tell me just whether or not you like it. I'm not the best writer and I only want to get better so plz plz plz if you do read it and have an opinion, i want to hear it... or read it lol!
The story takes place after season two of Legend of the Seeker ends. I had this bugging idea about my OC Shawn going to their world from the future. I thought it would be cool to compare worlds and see how they react to each other. The idea kept pestering me so i started writing it. It helps to understand the story if you have seen the show but because I throw my OC into the Seeker's world, they need to explain things to him, so it shouldn't be too confusing. If you have ideas or obstacles I could add to the story or things you might like to see happen, I would love to hear about it!
I'll continue posting and writing if i get reviews.
Thanks for those of you who read it! here's the link:
jparry213.deviantart.com/art/L…?